5.应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。6.达到了预期的写作目的。第三档:(7一9分)1.基本完成了试题规定的任务。2.虽漏掉一些内容,但覆盖所有主要内容。3.应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。4.有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,但不影响理解。5.应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文内容连贯。6.整体而言,基本达到了预期的写作目的。第二档:(46分)1.未恰当完成试题规定的任务。2.漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容,写了一些无关内容。3.语法结构单调、词汇知识有限。4.有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响了对写作内容的理解。5.较少使用语句间的连接成分,内容缺少连贯性。6.信息未能清楚地传达给读者。第一档:(1一3分)1.未完成试题规定的任务。2.明显遗漏主要内容,写了一些无关内容,原因可能是未理解试题要求。3.语法结构单调、词汇知识有限。4.较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响对写作内容的理解。5.缺乏语句间的连接成分,内容不连贯。6.信息未能传达给读者。不得分:(0分)未能传达给读者任何信息;内容太少,无法评判;所写内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。写作第二节(满分25分)】One possible version:I stood there,not knowing what to do next.The cold rejection from Sam left me feeling both embarrassed and a bitlost.As I looked around the classroom,I saw other groups of students chatting and laughing,but I felt like an outsider,unable to break into any of those circles.Just at that time,Shirley appeared.It turned out that she happened to witnessthe incident through the windows.Without hesitation,she came in,led me out and told me that she could help me solvethe problem of the student card.Shirley accompanied me to the Student Union and soon,I succeeded in addressing thestudent card problem.What Shirley did for me made me awkward and ashamed.Her kindness was like a warm ray of sunshine on a coldday,but it also made me feel incredibly guilty for the way I had treated her earlier.So I told Shirley what I thought whenI first met her and apologized to her.But to my surprise,Shirley wasn't angry,simply saying,"It doesn't matter."From that moment on,I knew that I had been chasing after the wrong things and that true friendship wasn't aboutpopularity or appearances,but about the genuine care and kindness.And I vowed to myself that I would never again judgepeople based on those shallow criteria.—9